Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

3.31.2012

The Robber Bride–Good Words


As promised, here are some “Good Words” from The Robber Bride:


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Her face is silting up, like a pond; layers are accumulating. (pg. 79)
The memory of her is composed of shiny fragments, like a vandalized mosaic, or like something brittle that’s been dropped on the floor. Every once in a while Tony takes out the pieces and arranges and rearranges them, trying to make them fit. (pg. 150)
Despite the suffering he’s gone through and is still going through, there’s something shiny about him, shiny and new. Or else impermeable. She herself is so penetrable; sharp edges stick into her, she bruises easily, her inner skin is puffy and soft, like marshmallows. She’s covered all over with tiny feelers like the feelers on ants; they wave, they test the air, they touch and recoil, they warn her. Billy has no such feelers. He doesn’t need them. Whatever slams into him bounces right off – either he dismisses it, or instead of hurting him it makes him angry. (pg. 233-234)
It’s a sunless noon. Charis is in her garden, watched by the hens, who peer greedily through the hexagons of their wire fence, and by the remaining cabbages, goggling at her like three dull green goblin-heads emerging from the ground. The garden in November has a mangy, thumbed appearance; wilted marigolds, nasturtium leaves faded a pale yellow, the stumps of broccoli, the unripe tomatoes frost-killed and mushy, with silvery slug tracks wandering here and there. (pg. 247)
He was wearing a suit and carrying a briefcase, then end man in the almost-daily suit-and-briefcase parade that followed her father around like a tail. (pg. 341)
There was something about her that set her apart, an invisible barrier, faint and hardly there, like the surface of water, but strong nevertheless. Roz didn’t know what it was but she could feel it. She wasn’t like the others, she was among them but she wasn’t part of them. So she would push and shove, trying to break her way in. (pg. 360)
When she begins, with her rooming house stories, her stories of toilets and scrubbing, they roll their eyes and yawn delicately, like kittens, and change the subject back to their own mothers. Roz can’t possibly know, they imply. She can’t understand. (Pg. 381-382)
A long time later, after Roz was a married woman, after her mother had died – slowly and disapprovingly, since death was immodest, male doctors prying into your body being next door to sin – and after her father had followed, in jerky, painful stages, like a train shunting – after all this had happened and Roz was an orphan, she found out about the money. (pg. 384)
In every conversation between the two of them there was a third party present: her money, sitting between them on the sofa like some troll or heavy barely sentient vegetable. (pg. 386-387)
Then she hears a small voice, a small voice clear as ice-water, right at the back of her head. It’s the voice of experience. It’s the voice of Tony. Zenia lies, it says. (pg. 401)
He’s rumpled like a park-bench drunk, his skin is grey from travel, dark hollows ring his eyes. He’s lost weight, his flesh is loose, his face is starting to cave in, like some old guy without his false teeth, like the kid’s Halloween pumpkins a few days after the holiday is over and the candles inside have burned out. That softening, that subsiding inwards towards a damp central emptiness. (pg. 418)

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11.10.2011

Retro Night!

Tonight was our neighborhood dinner and the theme was “retro" night. We have six families who eat together every month and somehow it’s morphed into a different theme for every month….. sometimes even with costumes! (Tonight one couple came as Mike and Carol Brady. Hilarious!)
Everyone brought food they ate as kids. We had hamburger biscuit casserole, Salisbury steak and gravy, peanut butter filled celery sticks, creamed corn, and cornbread.
I brought BBQ green bean bacon rolls and pear-mayo-cheddar cheese salad! :-) (They are better than they look, promise!)
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So this is my creativity for today – cooking with lots of color, photographing, and “retro-ing” it up with Photoshop.
I also met with a new friend plus an old friend to begin a writing group. We discussed how we thought the writing group might work and did a short writing prompt together: “Write about two rivers that join together.” I like the direction mine took and may rework it this weekend.
And – oh! This weekend!! Big plans and I’ll be sure to share!
Finally, one of the three most creative things I’ve ever done and her name is Mary. Precious, isn’t she? Taller than me at 12 – hard to believe! Smart, funny, makes me laugh all the time. I love her!
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PS. Don't forget to take a look at today's postings for AEDM! I've found some lovely places to land over there.

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5.01.2011

An Unintentional Break

Unintentional: Not intended or deliberate; inadvertent; unwitting

12 days off from blogging. I think that’s my longest break ever. Nothing is wrong, life is good… I just decided – not really deliberately – to take a step back from all things electronic… computer, email, blogging, surfing the ol’ Internet, etc. It’s impossible to stop all digital activity completely and still live and work these days it seems, though. I’m pretty much always at my computer at work and then there’s the necessary emails to teachers, study groups, etc. while at home. And of course, the phone!! Imagine being without a cell phone these days! Imagine not always being immediately “available!” Ugh.
But here I am, always drawn back to recording life and loves and likes via this blog. I’ve been at it since, uh, well… I think 2007 (!) and it’s still a place of refuge, planning, exploration, and cherishing. A place to both look forward and back. A good place.
So, here it is May, 2011! Happy Sabbath, friends! Looks like it will be a lovely, lovely day here. I’ve so much to share with you, but I think today I will just mention this one thing – I entered our county’s local writing contest and was awarded first place in both adult poetry and adult non-fiction!! Hooray! Today is the award ceremony and reading. I’m a little nervous about the reading. I’m getting over a nasty, nasty cold and my head still feels like it’s twice its normal size. When I talk I feel the words reverberating around my skull. Hopefully, I’ll be feeling better by this afternoon.
The poem was one I wrote some time ago about a teacher I had in 8th grade. The original is here. I dusted it off and spiffed it up a bit before entering it, but it is basically the same. (By the way, in section IV, it’s supposed to be omniscient not ominous. Snort! Funny how you read something and read it and read it but never catch such an obvious error. Dang that spell check!! It’s published wrong in the booklet that’s coming out today for the contest, too. Oh, well. At least I caught it before I read it wrong!)
My non-fiction piece is about an afternoon I spent with a friend last year while she started a new round of chemo. I’ve never put it on this blog and entered it into the contest on a whim. I’m very surprised it won and am struggling a bit with what part of it to read today. It’s a pretty emotional piece – my friend has since died and I’m not sure I’ll be able to read without some tears. I really hope I hold it together. Here’s the last two of the four paragraphs I think I’ll read:

Her doctor, a kind woman with a long willowy frame and short dark hair, comes in and they talk about medicine schedules, next appointments, and prescriptions. I frantically try to jot everything down in my notebook so I can report back to her husband, getting confused by all the odd sounding words - neuropathy, Oxaliplatin, Ultram - and spelling them as best as I can phonetically. This disease has a country and a language all of its own, I think, and the natives don’t take kindly to tourists. The doctor asks about pain, chastising her to be honest. Is she in pain all the time now? I watch as a shadow of fear scampers across her face and then she answers. Yes, pretty much all the time. Her eyes dart over to me to see if I have registered this piece of information. She doesn’t want me to know. They begin to discuss new pain control options and I look down at my notebook, pretending to take more notes. But I am really hiding my face so she doesn’t see that the shadow has jumped from her to me and is circling about trying to find a comfortable perch.
*****
We are alone again and the chemo bag is finally empty. She has become restless, asking how much longer, saying she is feeling very hot, shifting about to get comfortable. Just as the last electrolyte push is finishing, and the nurse is disconnecting the IV, she begins to vomit. The nurse can’t get a pan to her in time so I wad up a blanket and shove it in her lap so she doesn’t soil her clothes. The black boots are now firmly planted on the floor as she bends over and is sick. She hasn’t eaten anything today so there isn’t much to throw up. The nurse and I flit around the small room trying to get the pan and wet rags. When it is over she sits back, wiping her face. I’m sorry. Don’t, I say. Don’t say you are sorry. She repeats the apology several times as the nurse gets more anti-nausea medicine for her and takes out the IV. The nurse tells her she doesn’t have anything to be sorry about and I murmur agreement, trying to make soothing noises as I pat her hand. But I understand. She is saying she is sorry for the mess, but more. She is sorry for the attention she is requiring, the disruption of schedules. She is sorry her body is rebelling. She is sorry she has cancer. I’m sorry, too, I whisper.

So, that’s all from me today! Blessings, bloggy friends~


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2.01.2011

Covering Her True Countenance...

Yesterday I took the day off from work and home to go to Greensboro with a teacher from Mary's school and another parent to visit this classical Christian school. We were looking at their curriculum and, in particular, how they "do" middle school, or what is called the "Logic School" in the classical educational world. It was a wonderful visit and seems like a really good school... much larger than ours probably ever will be, but still the same basis and philosophy of education. I left reminded of why Matt and I have so heartily bought into classical Christian education for our kids.

It was a good, but tiring, day which I finished off with our Life Group meeting. We have a great discussion on the Scripture passages we all read together the previous week. Leviticus 20 gives one MUCH to talk about. Smile.

But... back to Greensboro. We had the chance to peek into a few classrooms that were underway. One we observed was a literature class for 8th graders. They were reading Julius Caesar, I believe, and were going over their vocabulary words, the definitions, and how they were used as parts of speech in the book. Here was their list:

fickle (adj)
servile (adj)
countenance (n)
wont (adj)
chide (v)
liable (adj)
foolery (n)
incense (v)
prodigious (adj)
redress (v/n)


As the teacher (a young lady who is a recent graduate from Grove City) went around to check that they had completed their definitions, she gave them the following assignment:  Write a sentence that contains all of their vocabulary words used as the same parts of speech listed above. Hmmm...

Within the span of about five minutes at least 10 students had taken a stab at it. We left before I heard their responses, but of course I had to jot them down so I could give it a try myself!

So - let me run over to Websters really quick and then I'll give it a try. Hang on just a sec....

Ok, here goes:

Incensed to anger but covering her true countenance with a servile demeanor, Elspeth tried to redress the situation by gently but firmly chiding the fickle child to stop the foolery she was so wont to display and which made her liable to even more prodigious acts of disobedience.

Ta-da!

Elspeth, by the way, was the name of one of the young teachers we observed. What a great name. I had never heard of it before. It is the Scottish form of Elizabeth and means 'chosen by God' or 'consecrated by God.' I think it's lovely. Wonder if I could talk one of my kids into using it for one of their children's names?


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11.23.2010

Really Short Stories


Last night, a friend told me about this site and then this one.

The idea of a 30 word story (and contest!) grabbed me. I wrote one submission last night and another two this morning while taking a walk. I think I'll let them marinate a few days before submitting. Regardless, it was fun.

Here are my three as they stand right now. The first is an idea for a story I've had for a good while. The last two were pictures that just came to me.

The Sleep Makers
They’ve never figured it out. Most dream, but a few don’t. Some sleep the sleep of death, but others (like me) toss and fret and make war with the night.


Bearing Witness
When the waters finally came they slithered like Satan low on his belly, seeping under doors and then clawing up my pale blue walls. I stood motionless. Waiting. Bearing witness.

Curve
I watched as they pulled my body from the car.

“She never saw the turn.”

“No,” I thought, knowing I was beyond speaking and they beyond hearing, “I saw it.”



What to try? The guidelines are here! Fun exercise if nothing else.

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4.09.2009

Seventeen Minute Writing Prompt #4


Here's another Seventeen Minute Writing Prompt from Judy Reeves:

You're in the grocery store...

1. Set a timer for 17 minutes. (You can use the one on my sidebar.)
2. Write, write, write...poetry, fiction, nonfiction, whatever.

3. You don't have to stop at 17 minutes if you've got a good flow going.
4. Read what you write aloud to somebody.
5. Let me know how it went....ie, leave a comment, email, etc.

Now, go!


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4.08.2009

Waiting



Here's my writing from the 17 Minute Writing Prompt #3: You're waiting...

Delia likes to say that there’s a whole truckload of things she’s not good at and only a cupful that she is. Public speaking is in the cup. Her presentation at the conference this morning couldn't have gone better and now she's feeling relaxed, happy, and very ready to be home.

Waiting, which she finds herself doing now, is in the truck. Delia supposes it’s an indication that she is simply not a very patient person. She is in the Atlanta airport, sitting with her legs crossed, black pump dangling from one foot, swinging her leg up and down, up and down, waiting – impatiently - for her delayed flight to board. Delia had just barely made out the words “maintenance delay” from the clerk's garbled announcement an hour ago. Not something that she really liked to hear about a plane she was just about to trust her life to. At the moment, the said plane was being “repaired” and would soon be released to the gate. She wondered exactly what was being repaired…the air conditioning system? The fuel intake? The landing gear? It made a difference.

Delia found a spot at the end of a row of scooped out hard plastic chairs and put her briefcase on the empty seat to her left. She rolled her red suitcase close to her right, making a sort of privacy fence. She told herself that if the waiting area got crowded she would open up the seat, but for right now, Delia wanted to seal herself off and get lost in the novel she had picked up earlier in the Minnesota airport. Taking a sip of room temperature soda from the bottle she’d purchased at the same time as the book, Delia opened the paperback and picked up where she had left off on the previous flight. Before long she was blissfully lost in the story.

Delia reached that zone where she was barely aware of her surroundings, imagining in detail the intrigue that was happening in the book. After only about five or ten minutes, though, a sharp voice nearby brought her back from the streets of Washington DC to the loading area of Hartsfield-Jackson International Airport.

“Jenny, get over here right now!”

She looked over the top of her book and saw a large man, maybe ten or so years younger than her, in blue jeans and a red Atlanta Braves baseball cap. He wore a stained yellow golf shirt, untucked and hanging loose from a rounded belly.

Jenny was a beautiful child, maybe about four or five years old, with long light brown curls. She wore a red sundress printed with white daisies and white buckled sandals. There was a matching red bow clipped in her hair. Delia assumed the man was her father. The sharp tone of his voice had penetrated Delia’s concentration and she found herself unable to get back to reading. She kept reading and rereading the same sentence over and over.

She sighed and put the book down in her lap, taking another sip of soda. Jenny, Delia soon noted, had a younger brother. She heard Jenny call him Davie. He must have been barely three and was dressed very much like the man – jeans, little brown cowboy boots, and a baseball cap that he kept taking off and throwing up in the air. Jenny would squeal with each throw and chase after the hat.

Jenny let out an exceptionally loud shriek of delight and the man got out of his chair, strode three long, hard steps to her side, and jerked Jenny’s arm so hard brown hair flew out behind her.

“I said Get. Over. Here. Right. Now!”

Delia could see the muscles flexing in his jaw as he clenched his teeth. He roughly picked her up and sat her firmly (too firmly she thought) in the chair next to him. Jenny bowed her head and covered her face with chubby white hands. Her hair became a curtain. Delia expected to hear muffled sobs coming from the girl after such rough treatment, but Jenny remained oddly silent and still. Davie, who continued to run up and down the aisle between two rows of seats, bumping into luggage and knees, seemed oblivious to his sister’s plight. And the father didn’t notice the little boy, either, but put his full attention on Jenny. Now that Delia thought about it, she hadn’t seen him correct the boy the whole time she had been watching.

He leaned down over the girl and said something too low for Delia to hear. Jenny vigorously shook her head, the red bow loosening and beginning to slide from her hair. Delia began to feel a knot in the pit of her stomach and a tightening in her throat. This was wrong. The man’s words were too harsh; he was hyper-focused on Jenny, waiting for her to make a mistake. There was something in this guy’s eyes that made Delia want to get up and punch him. Or at a minimum bawl him out.

The man finally let Jenny get out of the chair and rejoin her brother, but within just a few minutes, she was jerked back to her chair, this time with a loud, “I’m gonna blister your butt, girl!”

The waiting area was getting more crowded now, and several passengers stared hard at the man and then shook their heads and averted their eyes. An older lady leaned over and whispered into a man’s ear that Delia guessed was her husband. The man raised his eyebrows and nodded.

Jenny and Davie and their father finally boarded a plane to New Jersey at the gate next to Delia. It had passed through her mind a couple of times to confront the man and indeed she had found herself tensed and on the edge of her seat. But, in the end, she thought better of it, thinking that it would probably cause more harm than good to Jenny. Instead, Delia offered up a prayer for Jenny as she watched the swishing red dress disappear down the walkway to the waiting plane. She prayed for Jenny’s safety, that Jenny had a mother who was kind and loving, even that she was mistaken and this man was not Jenny’s father, just an uncle or family friend that her parents had poorly chosen as a chaperone on the flight.




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4.04.2009

Writing Prompt #3


Here's your prompt for today: You're waiting...

Remember to set a timer for 17 minutes (you can use the one on my sidebar if you'd like - turn up the sound on your computer for the alarm), write and write and write, read what you've written out loud, and finally, let me know how it went!

Here's a link to Judy Reeves' (author of Writing Alone, Writing Together) explanation of why you should do timed writings.

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4.03.2009

Book Review: Writing Alone, Writing Together


Writing Alone, Writing Together: A Guide for Writers and Writing Groups by Judy Reeves, Publisher: New World Library (September 18, 2002), ISBN-10: 1577312074

Rating: 5 of 5 STARs
Source: Not sure, probably just searching around on Amazon

I really, really liked this book. It has inspired me to try to get back on the stick with my writing and to be serious about starting a writing group in the Sandhills for women. Judy Reeves has a wonderful, straight-forward way of writing that pulls you in and makes you believe this is something you can do.

Reeves has a website I haven't fully explored but, if you're at all interested in writing, I'd suggest you take the time to go on over. Also, the writing prompts I've been giving you this week are from this book, too. Her website has more. There's also another book she's written called The Writer's Book of Days that has a writing prompt for every day of the year. I've already put in my basket at Amazon. :o)

The 'writing alone' portion of the book is limited to just the first chapter, but it's some very powerful pages. Just do it. Get started. Call yourself a writer. Make time for yourself. Practice, practice, practice. Stuff I knew, but needed to hear again.

The remaining chapters cover how we can write together in community. In chapters two and three she covers the basics about writing groups. Chapters four, five and six cover the three different types of writing groups: Read & Critique, Writing Practice, and Writing Workshops. In each chapter she gives many practical suggestions on how to start, participate in, and lead each type of group. Finally, in the last chapter, Reeves talks about how the writer can serve his/her community, how to find a writing retreat or conference, how to organize open readings, and how to have writing groups in special locations like prisons or treatment centers. An appendix touches on online writing groups and their pros and cons. All throughout the book, there are 'profiles' of actual writing groups, explaining their setup and learning experiences.

I can't emphasize how helpful I found this book. If you're part of a writing group, are thinking of starting a writing group, or are just interesting in writing in general, read this book.

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1.26.2009

Ohhh....Look What I Found!


Came across this blog (Daily Routines) from this blog (Dreams of Genevieve) from this blog (Half-Pint House) Oh, Bloggy-Linky-Love!

What is your daily routine? Here's pretty much mine:

Up super early (really - 4:30am or so...My body just works that way)
Walk downstairs, the dog's cold nose on my leg guiding me to the door to let her out
Make a cup of coffee with my beloved Keurig while she potties
Check my email, take a few turns of online Scrabble with my 77-year-old dad in Louisiana
Check a few favorite "honey pot" blogs until I'm really awake
Get another cup of coffee
Read a bit (Bible, devotion)
Pray
Write a bit
Clean kitchen (it always seems to be dirty)
Make lunches
Put out Mary's uniform (this usually involves digging in the dryer for a few minutes)
Get myself dressed (thankfully just jeans and a sweat shirt are acceptable)
Wake Matt and tell him I'm off to work and he's on duty
Grab another cup of coffee on the way out of the door
Drive 30 minutes to work, listening to a sermon or audio book
Attend a daily 8am operations meeting
Get some work done
Have lunch with Matt (who shows up around 9 or 10 after getting the kids to school, etc.)
Drive home, listen to sermon/audio book, talk on phone
An hour-and-a-half for ME!! (This should be my writing time!)
Pick up girls from school
Home, housework, start supper, get homework going
Nap, if possible! :o)
Supper - we meal-share with good friends/neighbors a few times a week...a blessing!
Check email, write, laugh at Matt, kids, and dog
Up to bed with Mary to read and fall asleep, E usually checks in, too

What's missing? EXERCISE!! Ugh! That will probably change after my doctor's appointment tomorrow and I find out how badly my body is continuing to deteriorate. I mean, I already know it's falling apart on the outside, but this is just to make sure I understand that the same thing is going on inside. (Deep sigh here.)

Anyhoo - liked the Daily Routines blog, especially from a writing point-of-view and Dreams of Genevieve looks really interesting, too. Blessings on your day!

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1.03.2009

500 Words: Nighthawks


A great way I've found to get myself writing is to use an image as a prompt. I love this painting (Nighthawks) by Edward Hopper. I used it to write from this morning. Give it a go yourself, or choose your own favorite painting or photograph to write about. Let me know how it goes!

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1.02.2009

First Lines


I did my 500 words this morning.

Pat-pat-pat. (That's me patting myself on the back.)

I used an idea from Naming the World. It suggested getting started by using a great first sentence. There were a couple of suggestions, but...I was feeling rebellious so I made up my own.

This was mine: It was time to get to work and go to sleep.

It made me think of looking up some of the best opening sentences from famous novels. Here's one for your pleasure:

The human race, to which so many of my readers belong, has been playing at children's games from the beginning, and will probably do it till the end, which is a nuisance for the few people who grow up. G. K. Chesterton, The Napoleon of Notting Hill (1904)

Grin. You have to love G.K....I bet he was a lot of fun at parties.

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12.13.2008

Seven on Saturday

I used to write little blurbs for a website called Six Sentences. You could write anything you wanted as long as it was done in six sentences. Colons and dashes abounded! I haven't done it for a while, but it was a great exercise. So, here's seven sentences for your consideration:

C.S. Lewis once said that in some ways we are like fish except that we swim around in time, not water. The oddity, though, is that unlike fish who will die if taken out of water, we seem most uncomfortable darting around in the sea of Time. How many times have we said, "How time flies! Is it really already that late?" Or, how many times at work have you watched the time crawl by, like honey dripping from a spoon? And aren't we so often shocked when we have been away from someone for years and meet them again to find that they haven't been frozen away somewhere, but have actually grown older? Children especially surprise us - how many of us have exclaimed when seeing our blushing niece or nephew, "I can't believe how much you've grown!" Lewis thought this uncomfortableness we have with time is evidence of it not being our natural media - we were created as eternal beings meant to live forever without the deadly ticking away of time.

Write Seven Sentences about anything and let me know! It's a fun challenge.

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11.19.2008

Writerly Wednesday: F


To get me writing some time ago, I started an "Alphabet Series" of essays based on unusual words starting with each letter of the alphabet. I made it to E.

The words so far have been:


I've been neglecting any purposeful writing lately, so I thought it might be a good idea to try to work on 'F'. Here's some of my choices:

fain - (all archaic) Preferably; Gladly. ~adj. 1. Ready, willing. 2. Obliged or require [...]
febrile - Pertaining to fever. Feverish.
feckless - Feeble. Lacking in purpose. Also 'Feck' - one who is feckless (and an amusing [...]
feculent - Full of foul matter, dregs.
fishtailing - (archery) Said of an arrow that flails from side to side in flight.
fledge - To take care of a young bird until it is ready for flight.
flense - To strip skin or blubber.
foetor - Strong stench. (variation : fetor)
Force Majeure - An unexpected event which releases one from ones obligations. Lit. superior forc [...]


So - here's your 'writerly' challenge for the week: write an essay, short story, poem...anything...based around one of these f-words. (Or ALL of them if you're really good!)Leave a link in the comments section to your blog so we can all enjoy and be inspired!

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11.05.2008

Writerly Wednesday: The One Minute Writer


The One Minute Writer was a 'Blog of Note' this week. It's a great concept and I'm glad to have found it. Thanks C. Beth! With everything going on in my life right now, one minute a day to write is probably all I've got.

Here's her prompt for today: Write about something nice a stranger did for you.

The idea is to only write from the prompt for one minute. So, here goes for me:

The only thing that comes to mind on this one is once when E was very small, maybe two or so, we were in the checkout line at a grocery store and she was throwing an ever-loving-hissy-fit to have some candy. The store manager quickly opened up a closed register and let us go first so I could get her out of there. It was probably more for his sanity than mine!

Give the One Minute Writer a try yourself. Good way to get your writing kicked off for the day!

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10.10.2008

Friday Photo


Instead of Five Word Friday, I've decided to do this Friday Photo. Write a short story, essay, or poem that is inspired by the photo above and using these three words: sidewalk, drop, creamy. Have fun!


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10.08.2008

Writerly Wednesday: Confusing Words & Such


Here's some tips on words that confuse me:

1. A While vs. Awhile

A while is a noun meaning “a length of time”
“I slept for a while.”- (compare with “I slept for a bit” and “I slept for three hours”)
“I was away from my desk for a while.”- (compare with “I was away from my desk for two minutes”)

Awhile is an adverb, meaning “for a time,” or literally, “for a while”.
“I slept awhile before dinner.”(compare with “I slept deeply before dinner” and “I slept badly before dinner”.)

2. e.g. vs. i.e.

e.g. stands for the Latin phrase “exempli gratia,” which means “for the sake of example.” You should use it when presenting examples or more possibilities for the term in question. An easy way to remember this is to associate e.g. with “example given.” I like citrus fruits (e.g., oranges and lemons)

i.e.
i.e. Stands for the Latin phrase “id est,” which means “that is.” You should use it when explaining or rephrasing a sentence. Usually it has the same meaning as “in other words.” I like all fruits (i.e., I eat pretty much anything)


3. Everyday vs. Every Day

Everyday, the single word, is an adjective describing something that happens daily (an everyday occurrence), or is common or usual. For example: Because I was going to be doing messy work, I wore my everyday clothes instead of my work clothes.

Many people use the word everyday when they mean to use “every day”. When the two words are used separately, they are synonymous with “each day.” I eat peanut butter for lunch every day.

(Taken from the Misused Words Archives at Daily Writing Tips.)

Happy writing!


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10.07.2008

Five Word Friday: Inseparable


Here's my very late Five Word Friday with last week's words: club, metamorphosis, meow, sightless, befuddle

Inseparable

When I was around 11 or 12, I was inseparable from three girls: Tonya, Anna, and Jenny. (Not their real names.) We were all in the same sixth-grade class and three 0f us lived within a mile of one another. Tonya and Anna were cousins; Jenny was the daughter of the pastor at the Baptist church I attended.

It was the typical love-hate relationship girls tend to have at that age. We would adore each other one day, laughing and playing, imagining we were part of a secret club with covert codes for entry into Tonya’s tree house: “knock-knock-meow-hey-kitty-kitty.” And then the next day we would pair up two against two - or worse, three against one - whispering and snickering behind each others backs at school, passing nasty notes when our teacher wasn’t looking. We were such mean little things!

But in the end we would always make up, and four of us could be found at one house or the other for a weekend sleepover. I can’t imagine how many hours we spent riding our bikes between houses, heat monkeys from the hot Louisiana asphalt licking at our bare feet. Or how many nights we spent singing and dancing to the Grease movie soundtrack, imagining we would grow up to be as glamorous as Olivia Newton-John one day. Or how many gallons of lime sherbet and bags of M&Ms we ate.

It was a time of changing from girl to teenager, the first stages of the painful metamorphosis into womanhood. Hormones were beginning to surge and befuddle our simple girlhood realities into lives so much more complex. And, horrors upon horrors, some of us were finding that we actually liked boys.

I’ve pretty much lost track of all three of them now. We drifted apart in high school, each finding our own niche. Me the dance team, Jenny music, Tonya her boyfriend, and Anna…well, I’m not really sure. I did go visit Jenny about five years ago, though. She finished nursing school, married, moved to a lovely house in Texas, and has three beautiful children she home schools. A good life, I think. It was great to see her, but the little girls in us were barely there anymore and it seems we’ve lost each other again.

Tonya left home her junior year of high school to live with her boyfriend’s family when she and her mom’s arguments got to be too much for either of them. Her father killed himself shortly after she graduated. I was told he had been an alcoholic. I never knew; Tonya never told us. I was away at college and didn’t go home to the funeral. Tonya married her high school boyfriend and, the last I heard, they were still together. I hope he’s good to her.

I think Anna still lives in her childhood home and is a teacher. Anna’s mom became pregnant with her out of wedlock and never married. She lived at home with her parents, finished nursing school, and raised her baby girl with their help. So Anna grew up with the shame of having a single, never-married mother and no father in the picture. She never talked about being different, and none of us girls ever brought it up, either. By today’s standards it would have been no big deal. But at that time, and in our small community, it was a scandal for a couple to get a divorce, much less for a woman to have a child and never marry. I would have expected Anna to move far away as soon as she could. I wonder what has kept her in our little town, even in the same house. She’s the only one of us still there.

I turn 40 in a week…egad! I’m trying to remember all of the other girls’ birthdays, but the only one I know for sure is Jenny’s – December 10th. I think both Tonya and Anna had birthdays earlier in the year; they should already be 40. So, I’ll be next and then finally Jenny. I wonder how they’re handling it – which one is struggling with aging, which one could care less, which one has too many other things going on in her life to even think about it. I wonder if any have battled cancer, gotten divorced, or lost a child. Funny to think that I don’t know these things about them….Funny how time has a way of marching on, sightless and without feeling, breaking those bonds that you once thought could never be severed.

Happy 40ths, Tonya, Anna, and Jenny…wherever and however you are. I find myself missing my three girlfriends today.

I think I'll take a break from Five Word Friday for now....so no new words. I'll have to come up with something new! Cheers! :~}

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10.02.2008

Writerly Wednesday: What's in a Name?


Oops! A bit late on Writerly Wednesday....seems to have been my theme for the whole week, huh?

Looking for a name for a fictional character? Try the Social Security Administration. You can get the most popular male and female names back to the 1880's, I think. Pretty cool.


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9.17.2008

Writerly Wednesday

Some random writerly things:

Here's a site on writing contests....go ahead, I dare you!

I love personification in writig. Here's a fun personification writing prompt to try...The one I'm going to try is "The trumpet peered." I'll let you know how it goes.

One of my most favorite authors, Kathleen Norris has a new book out: Acedia & Me: A Marriage, Monks, and a Writer's Life. Also - Here's a short snippit on her from USA Today with links to an interview and excerpt from her book.

I've always wondered about Haikus...Here's a definition on their structure and a challenge to write two of them. You can do it!

Finally, here's the link to the bookstore that the picture above came from. It's The Book Barn in Pennsylvania. Hmmm...haven't been to PA in a good while! Anyone up for a trip??? ;->

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I sought the Lord, and He answered me; He delivered me from all my fears. Psalm 34:4